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Love is nothing,
Without a kiss.
Love is everything,
When you feel like this.
Love is precious,
When they mean everything to you.
Love is painful,
When they're not with you.
Love is priceless,
The true kind can't be bought.
Love is life...
When it's all you've got.


bleh...tell me how you like it...o.o;
Just some gay little poem I made up about love...bleh
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TheLegendaryHeron Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*claps* Your poem is beautiful and true! :D
SexyLelouchfan09 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016
I thought it was awesome. 5/5 stars, LOL.

Vehement-Crusade Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Professional Artist
DoveAngel8 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Short simple, good. ;)
Nsawatchlist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
03Cerecer10 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist
So pretty! :3 <3
seventh9 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
i like it
        PS check mine out plz
ayalalouie Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
i like it
veltriben Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Might be gay, but still really good!
Feral-nz Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Making money on the internet and serious cash in a matter of days
save023 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Let your computer do the work and EARN money!
Dracosphere Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The image and the poem are just so lovely...This is beautiful.
JayCookie1997 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful. . . .
Silvery-Lightness Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Artist
love it
chiratsukionna Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool!!*thumbs up*
michellecota Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SekuraUchiha Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's beautiful <3
Pikachulord Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Artist
Girl) Am I pretty? (Boy)No (Girl) Do you want to be with me forever? (Boy)No (Girl) Would you cry if I walked away? ..........................................(Boy)No She heard enough and wazs hurt, she walked away tears ran down her face. The boy grabbed her arm (Boy) You're not pretty, you're beautiful (Boy) I dont want to be with you forever, I NEED to be with you forever (Boy) And I wouldn't cry if you walked away, I would die! (Boy whispers) Please stay with me (Girl whispers) Of course.
Sir-Legit Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.
Denisaiko Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my Gosh, may I use your poem for a song I'm composing? I am making an album with songs composed by me on poems taken from deviantart and I will be happy to give you credit on it, and maybe royalties, if the cd sells.
jewbear8D Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
very cute, you could definatly expand on some of the ideas
Razelly Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
>_> I don't see how it's gay?
babyboy02 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
its..cute, well coming from babyboy02 here it dont mean much, but its really cute. you shouldnt be disgusted a bout love and/or you poem, u have a natural talent, please show the world that u know u have it.
CarmineDevian Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Writer
I have to admit it is cute, ya
kira-ichini Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awe!! so cute!!
aonex Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
the pic and poem together (or separate!!) r freaking ADORABLE :DDD <333 so cute!
feogirl67 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww! i love it.anybody check out my story on my page- please! no one knows about it.
Raybu Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
oh my god~! <3 im in love with a friend ive known for 7 years and this is abit how i feel..
well the point is thad this is very well wroten and i love it! :D
aauronn Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
I Like it
obsessedATfangirl Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't like the description. The poem is not "gay" because gay is what a person is not a poem. It's an offense to everyone that is gay. Including me. The poem is very good. The description ruined it.
hnm114 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student General Artist
You know gay also means happy too right?
obsessedATfangirl Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course.
hnm114 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student General Artist
oh ok sorry ^^;
rockPolotics Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Woah, that's really cheesy. No offense, well, kind of i guess, but i'm not seeing anything new. It's witty within its genre, but i feel like i've heard every single line of it. unfortunately, this kind of thing is what the average dA person likes. damn you mob mentality!

and to you guys who voted this so well, go read a book or something.
cvang001 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
I likes it!
Isabe11a Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
every word of that means something special to me ^_^ hmmmmm
Snowflakesgirl Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful !
paraXmelXmore Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just thought I'd let you know that my soon-to-be-ex husband stole this poem and recited it to me when he proposed. Silly that I'm telling you this, but I thought it should make you feel nice that someone wanted to use your poetry in a marriage proposal, even though he said he wrote it.
It's quite lovely :)
rrk13 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
this poem is amazing, it completely expresses everything that i feel about my girlfriend and reading this just made my day
dianalovesrock17 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing both, the drawing and the poem:D
Iamquestionable Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
I love it. IT is a great poem. It is completely true as well.
NinjaAj Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
very beautiful. i even showed my girlfriend the like to this
madison99 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its amaizing :heart:
kooky112 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's all true... every bit of it. Take it from someone whose heart was not only broken... but crushed. I was engaged, but my fiance broke it off with me because he cheated on me. But yes, this is how love feels, only much much deeper.
violet-the-poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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